bahut acche!
some of these are real gems, still wondering which one should be my favorite 🙂
but perhaps it will be the second last one. “paraye dard ko…”
and here arem y two bits…
“bohat der se jana, ke jo tha, accha hi tha
tu har shaks ki kismat, yun hi nahi likhta”
Cant Ask For More. Every One Who Has Commented Here is Gem In Der Own Capacity. Having Their Words on ‘Just a Creation’ is Achievement For Me. Wont Thank Anyone, Since I Cant Repay For Motivation & Inspiration Everyone Has Given to Me. M Simply Obliged and Honored. Lookin Forward to Bring More Emotions n Expressions on Paper With The Support of Words.
bahut Khoob ! behad khoobsoorat ! Har ek sher dil mein ghar kar gaya ! Mujhe apne puraane din yaad aa gaye jab shayari aur kalam se khas muhabbat hua karti thi, Asjkal zarroratein badal gayeen hai ! lekin aap bahut achha likhte hain, Bas likhte rahiye ,yahi dua hai !!
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July 6, 2010 at 7:08 pm
ladynimue
this was impressive !!!!! mind blowing !!! gonna save this and keep forever !
July 6, 2010 at 7:10 pm
iBeingMe
Awesome Work !! Mind blowing !!
July 7, 2010 at 5:26 am
*KHUSHI*
Wah..!!! aap ne yo jo Nahi likhta ikha hain waise hi likhte rahiye…. keep it up… !!!
July 7, 2010 at 5:33 am
neerja
i am stunned!
what a piece!
marvellous!
Fantastic..just Great!
July 7, 2010 at 5:39 am
Manju
Wow!! It’s too.. Good. Yu hi Likhate Raho Hamesha… 🙂
July 7, 2010 at 5:42 am
Prashanth M
Awesome wordings there! Loved each piece.
July 7, 2010 at 5:54 am
juneesh
Too good man.. esp. उसकी ताक़त का नशा.. “मंत्र और कलमे” में बराबर है !! Aapne ek hee ashaar se murred banaa liya.
Keep it up man…
July 7, 2010 at 6:55 am
Ashutosh Pandey
I can say only one word. that is “Awesome”
July 7, 2010 at 7:31 am
adee
bahut acche!
some of these are real gems, still wondering which one should be my favorite 🙂
but perhaps it will be the second last one. “paraye dard ko…”
and here arem y two bits…
“bohat der se jana, ke jo tha, accha hi tha
tu har shaks ki kismat, yun hi nahi likhta”
🙂
July 7, 2010 at 7:48 am
Ashik
Cant Ask For More. Every One Who Has Commented Here is Gem In Der Own Capacity. Having Their Words on ‘Just a Creation’ is Achievement For Me. Wont Thank Anyone, Since I Cant Repay For Motivation & Inspiration Everyone Has Given to Me. M Simply Obliged and Honored. Lookin Forward to Bring More Emotions n Expressions on Paper With The Support of Words.
*BOW*
July 7, 2010 at 7:51 am
Winnie the Poohi
aWESOME aWESOME!!!
nahi likhta kehke aapne jo likha hai.. uski raunak kuch alag hi hai!
dil ko chuh gayi yeh
July 8, 2010 at 7:01 pm
Akhtar Hussain
bahut Khoob ! behad khoobsoorat ! Har ek sher dil mein ghar kar gaya ! Mujhe apne puraane din yaad aa gaye jab shayari aur kalam se khas muhabbat hua karti thi, Asjkal zarroratein badal gayeen hai ! lekin aap bahut achha likhte hain, Bas likhte rahiye ,yahi dua hai !!
July 9, 2010 at 9:43 am
Amaresh
बहुत् बढ़िआ ।
July 10, 2010 at 5:46 am
ladynimue
read and loved it all over again !!!
July 14, 2010 at 1:09 pm
soni
bahut achche bahut achche?**************
July 18, 2011 at 8:05 pm
Winnie the Poohi
Read this again! dude! iska font aur color change karo na!